2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Computer has been widely recognized by us as a whole,because the computer makes our lives more colorful and convenience.We can go shopping in the internet,scan all the information.besides,we work and study by the computer. However,computer has aroused conflicting views.Despite the benefits of computer,many people, especially parents are not ready to embace it.Instead,they insist that the computer is a tool of wasting time .It makes children spent much time in playing games or talking with their friends .Then they don't study well in school and become less of sense of responsibility and self-discipline. As far as I concerned,the significance of computer is beyond doubts.We should use it in a good way in a good time .