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安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。
请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山（the Yellow Mountain ）。
（1）位于安徽南部，是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。
（2）乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时；也可以乘火车或飞机去。
注意
1. 词数：80 词左右。
2. 请不要逐字翻译
单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；简单句偏多了；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；请注意分段。
Hello my friend. Have you been to Yellow mountain. It is fun. Many girls there. Hello my friend. Have you been to Yellow mountain. It is fun. Many girls there. Hello my friend. Have you been to Yellow mountain. It is fun. Many girls there. Hello my friend. Have you been to Yellow mountain. It is fun. Many girls there.
