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How should parents help children to be independent? In moder social,with the rapid development of ecnomic ,the standard of people's life is proving mostly.And most Chinese families, the situation that there are only one children has widespread.The parents pay more money ,energy and love to their sole kid.Children are filled with abudant potail life,so they have few chances to have a independent experiens.In highschool and college ,some students that are without the help of parents ,they hardly could not take care themselves ,including washing their clothes. In my view,if one person want to grow up quickly ,who has to learn to be independent.In order to develop the habit of independent for children,parents should be strict with them.Making some asignments for him to finish in a limited time,or do some homework to change their laziness.In this social , independence is a good advatage to chase the step of perfecting a person .So ,be a student,we are not only getting a hardworking ,but also have a perfect humanrity.