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Nowadays, with the economic develop fast , the degrees of people's life improved. The number of people who shopping in the internet is increasing ,is that , the tendency of shopping in the internet being more fashion. Every coin has two side, including this attaching tendency .It's obvious that the new way to purchase have many advantage . For instance ,it is convenice that choosing different things you really need.Meanwhile ,there are alternative brand in the internet shop . On the other hand ,the safety during the deal course is the biggest problem . I have an alike experience ,I send the money to liar without attention.At last ,the money can't come back and i have using my own money to buy things again. At where I stand, I keep a optimistic attitude to the new way of shopping. With the worldwide internet developed , shopping in the internet must become famous.However,we should still keep caucious to the fashion tendency.
