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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17369
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
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作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分学术词汇,单词拼写也要仔细;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;采用了一些简单的从句。

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As we know, computer play an important role in our daily life, so the rationship between computer and man become more and more complix. We, as a college student, study well on the computers.For example, we can search for many materials that we don't know. Reading newspapers, wacthing movies and keeping tuch with friends on computers are so convenient. Some wokers can do work on computers, which can save a lot of time. With the help of computer, scientists, doctor,teacher and business can do their work perfect. In a word, computer is to people what water is to fish. On the other hand, computer can brings negative effects. Some people sale illegal goods ,cheat others and crime though computer. waht's more, some students are addicted to computer games, so they have to give up their study. One coin has two faces, we should take advantage of computers in a right way.

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