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At present, the phenomence of many commodities pack exceedly that has arouse wide public concern, and becoming more and more popular. There are many reasons to explain this phenomence. First, many people are think high of the packing of commodity. They would have bought it if the commodity had a pretty packing. second, the manfacturer is willing to provide commodities with pretty packing. Fast, people's ability of consume has increasing constantly. As far as I am concerned, this phenomence will bring a series of problem in the future if we don't make some effective measures to solve it. In view of improtance and complexity of the phenomence, it need goverment , society and personal solve it together. On the one hand, it is necessary that improving the awareness of people. On the other hand, goverment should take some step to restrain this phenomence . Only in this way , can we believe that we have a good inprovement about packing exceedly.
