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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；可适当增加从句的使用；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。
In judging from what is vividly depicted in the drawing above,we can observe distinctly that a bottle was upset,with most of its water pouring out and the two men responded quite the opposite,one feeling gloomy while the other optimistic.Needless to say,this picture is meant to convey the importance of optimism. It is of no difficulty for us to put forward some factors that contribute to this notion. At the top of the list,a positive attitude is more conducive to solving the problem than negative complaints.Banking on a reliable Internet survey,approximately 83% of the entrepreneurs interviewed believe that their achievements chiefly stem from their optimistic outlook on life.What is more,whenever confronted with adverse circumstances,folks with a positive mentality are more likely to persevere and conquer the difficulties.Finally,we must admit that it is our attitude rather than the situation itself that determines the end. Considering what has been discussed,a conclusion can be drawn safely that we should keep an optimistic attitude to our daily life,especially in such a rat race society.
