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Recently, there are many products in the market with beautiful packaging and some are more than one packaging.Actually,they are excessive packaging. There are various reasons why this phenomenon exists.First,they look luxurious ,maybe send to others as gifts,it is a very face-saving thing.Second,many consumers like to buy goods with nice appearance which can attract more consumer's eyes and it can increase sales.Last,companies think that with beautiful packaging it's good for getting more benefits,because there is additional value. In my opinion,it is unnecessary to excessive packaging.It's a waste of resource and not contribute to protecting the environment.I think the product itself is the most important thing and packaging is just ornamental.I hope the goverment can appeal residents to reduce buying excessive packaging products.