2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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With the development of the economy,computers are more and more familiar to us humen. Talking about computer,different people have different opinions. As we all know,computers helps us a lot.For example, people can communicate frequently and can get news and knowledge easily.with the help of computer,we can study widely ,and computer can remember more than us humen and can calculate faster.in a word,computer is a great invent,and it make our life convenient.but in another world, it also has it's disadvantage,thinking about computer games, which effect a large amount of teenagersor even adults,they devote in it and lost passions on anything expect the game.there is a saying goes,many years later ,computer will replace human and hold the world.to avoid it, we should use computer more serious and try our best to thinking ,not just base on it.