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文中词汇表达灵活多样，学术词汇的使用还需加强；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
After the high school, most of people are starting their college life. College not only bring the plenty of knowledge to the young people, but also leave the most beautiful memories to everyone. No doubt, the college years are the best time in a person's life. College is the new begining of the life. the teens becomes to he adult, start to picture their future. they're struggling for their future in the college, day by day. the major they choosen, is relate to their future career. once people getting into the college, they will realize they are not the teenagers anymore. as being an adult, more freedom also means more responsibility. College also give most of people new life experience. such as sharing the house with bounch of new people which are not in your family, they could be your friend from the town you raised, could be the random people you've ever seen before. Anyway, people are getting use care about friends or roommates who are living with you. people starting have a sense of aweraness of turn down the volume when your roommate is sleeping or trying to be quite when others need to study at home. It helps people get to learn how to get well with others. this is one of the most important ability once you really get into society. The last but not least amazing things happen in college life is friendship and love. people may meet their soulmate in the corner of the cafeteria, the relationship is such a unique, the feeling people will never get when they starting the career life. and also, friends bring happy to the person. when people go to the fun parties with friends and meet other new friends, you may also learn something from this. All in all, college life it the most beautiful period in the person's life.
可可英语 - 划词释义
