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The importance of Reading classics Reading classics has been one tradition for many years in the major cities,at the New Year's Eve,every family watches Spring Festival Gala until the midnight which means the end of old year and the beginning of new year. In recent years,more and more people object to hold the Spring Festival Gala.Following with these points,I think we will find out why they oppose it.Firstly,the Spring Festival Gala seems not interesting enough than before.More and more people,especially the youngs are not interested in it.Secondly,comparing with the Spring Festival Gala,the New Year's Eve Entertainment which is held by other tv station like Hunan TV Station attracts more people's attention.Thirdly,people who don't subject Spring Festival Gala think it's dispointed that such big deal of funds are used in making party and an a result the party is not great enough. On my views,we can't cancel the Spring Festival Gala because it has been one tradition since many years ago.But at the same time,the Spring Festival Gala should take steps with the fashion.
