2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；文中应增加从句和复合句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Computer and Man With the development of society and economic,computers broadcast over the world,and now there is a computer in most family.It is used by these people whose age from 3 to 90 years old.Computer survives in our lives everywhere. In work ,we use a computer to create files ,agendas;make a face-to-face meeting on line ;send E-mails.Because of computers , a new work style appears in our lives,working in family .If we work in our own surroundings ,with a proper and moderate atmosphere ,we can do more effect at work.we also take care of family ,don't waste the time in the way of going to work . In daily lives , we shopping on line through computers,bought every thing that we want or need ;in our spare time ,we can use a computer to play games ,watch TV,listen to musics. these is the computer's advantage to our lives.There are some disadvantages with computers in our lives ,such as doing less execises, staying at home more time ,addicted in games ,abandoned work and study .So ,we should used computers correctly and in principle.