2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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From the part we can known that education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates There was an inccrease serious problem ,which is college students can't find job to have a good fimily.Many students hold that hight education is very importent for them to find a good job.When i see the form I known the reason why moe and more college students choose to lerarn in school rathe than work. As a college student ,I believe that whatevere we choose ,only we try our best to do well can we have a different gift.