2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中词汇表达多样性不足，在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

The harm of pc games With the development of economic,people'life has great changed.Especially,mang students are foud of pc games. On one hand,the game is harm for their study.It takes many times to play it for them.They can't make use of time to do other things.On other hand,playing the pc games will develop a bad habit in the future for them. As far as l am concerned,students couldn't play it when they cost plenty of time.