2005年1月英语六级作文真题:对病人进行捐助

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。

to willing help others is a virtue.for it, we can acquire a happiness .helping others is equal to help ourselves in some times. and there is a student who are attacked by the flu, and she is being illness. she was a university students, and in this year, it is suddenly to find that she was in a cancer. but it is benign. the girl's parents have debt a lot of money for her illness. and now, it is no other way but the receive the donation to have money for cure the illness. and the girl need to cure for a long time. and now , the her parents not very abundance and now it is even in debt . in order to help this family and the girl, they need to been donated. the number is the girl's father：0763-3657890. it hopes that the people who are in capability can stretched out your hands , to give the warmth for this family and the girl. thank you !