文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;能够使用一些不错的从句;文中词汇表达较为多样,但请认真检查词汇的拼写。
Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling Nowadays,the students' language spelling ability begin decreasing.In my opinion,something cause this reason is developing of the tecnich. In order to change this situation,I think we should take some measures to provent its worsefy. At first,we should arise the students' realize,the realization of accurately spelling,read more English work will improve that. Second,Internet is a good place for us to learn spelling besides school,such as watching English program and apreciate an English movie. Third,written is more important,it is increase not only grammar but also spellig. I hope my suggestions are helpful for you.