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with the progress of technology, people always take the plane to other places, so i think jet plane is one of the most important and influential inventions in the world. first of all, the plane makes the world smaller, everyone on earth, can go to anywhere on earth at any time.in the past due to the distance trip too far, so people only can go to some place where it is near our home, and every nation's culture cannot communicate. As we know plane can make the time of trip shorter,the plane is very fast, about 700-800 km/h , it is faster than others traffic tools expect rockets, people can use the save time to do others thing, people can create more value of their life, the plane makes our life more convenient. Last but not least, the plane plays a very important role in our life .the plane can promote social economic political, cultural education sports health, improve people's standard of living. in the future, plane will play an increasing important role. these are some of the reasons why jet plane the most important and influential inventions in the world
