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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；错误句子较少，可适当增加一些复杂句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。
SECTION 1 MAN: Hello, this is City Airport Information. How can I help you? WOMAN: Oh, hi, good morning. I'm going to fly to City Airport in London next week. It's my first time there.Could you tell me how can I get to Pudding Mill Lane from the air port? MAN: Pudding Mill Lane? It's quite easy.There are a couple of ways to get there.The fastest and most convenient way is to take DLR. WOMAN: DLR? What's that? MAN: It's short for "Docklands Light Railway." Actually, it it an overground system connecting East London to the London Underground network. WOMAM:That sounds nice. How often does the DLR depart from airport station? MAM: About every 8 to 15 minutes. You only need to make a transferring stop at Stratford and you will be there after another station. Of course, there always will be other option to get you there. For example, you may rent a car right here at the airport. WOMAN: Well. I don't have a valid driver's license. MAN: In that case, you could also take airport shuttle or train. Or, you can ask a favor from your friend. Do you have a friend or relative nearby? Because you may ask I them to pick you up at the forecourt, next to the terminal building. WOMAN:Let me think if it is worth troubling my friend... MAN: If so, their cars are not allowed to wait at the entrance without being unattended. WOMAN: No. I don't thinking my friend is going to be available on that day.So,I am thinking of maybe taking a cab... MAN:That works as well.There are plenty available,but it will cost you.There are two major cabs that are running in London:black cab and mini cab.I think you need mini cab. WOMAN:OK.But I know nothing about the systems cabs are working under.What should I do?
