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There is a widespread concern over the issue than the Spring Festival Gala. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that retain the Spring Festival Gala. In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, many people love looked the Speing Festival Gala. Furthemore, in the second place, it is celebrating New Year. so it goes without saying that their idea. People, however, differ in their opinion on this matter. Some people hold the idea that cancle the Spring Destival Gala. In their point of view, on the one hand, it have expense many money, on the other hand, people can't watch other progarms. Therefore, there is no doubt that cancle it. As far as i am concerned , i firmly support the view that the former. It is not only because it could celebrat New Year with people, but also because exhibition prosperity and good of country.
