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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17594
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅。

用户练习作文:

In my opinion,snap judgments can not be trusted.Before we making a important decision,we should think about it responsibly and carefully.I have 2 reasons for my view. First,a snap judgment is not a safety choice.It has larger risk than a thoughtful decision.People usually make a snap judgment when they are nervous or in a dangerous situation.They are not calm enough to make a right decision.It has a lot race to be wrong.A investigate done by some Psychologists showed people tend to make a judgment related to the result which they wish to happen when they don't have a good awareness of their situation.And actually they are wrong.So in order to ensure that everything goes well ,we'd better not trusted it. Second,snap judgment is not a perfection decision.When we make a decision,we must use our experience.However,making a snap judgment always use some minutes only.We haven't though about the entire clues,in another word,the judgment doesn't have some real support.It just our supposition without any reasons. That's all what i want to say,in a word ,if we don't want to broke down our project ,we'd better not believe the snap judgment.

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