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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17593
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅。

用户练习作文:

In my opinion,snap judgments cannot be trusted.Before we make an important decision,we should think about it responsibly and carefully.I have 2 reasons for my view. First,a snap judgment is not a safe choice.It has larger risk than a thoughtful decision.People usually make a snap judgment when they are nervous or in a situation which is dangerous.They are not calm enough and having a big chance to make a wrong judgment.An investigation made by some psychologists showed people tend to make a judgment related to the result which they wish to happen when they don't have a good awareness of their situation.And actually they are wrong.So in order to ensure that everything goes well,we'd better not trusted it. On the other hand,a snap judgment is not a perfect decision.When we make a decision,we must use our experience.However,making a snap judgment always use some minutes only.We haven't though about all the clues,in other words,the judgment doesn't have some real support.It is just our supposition without any reasons. That's all what I want to say,in a word,if we don't want to break down our project,we'd better not trust snap judgments.

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