题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
From the saying ,we can learn that building and maintaining trust is very important for us. However,what's the most difficult thing for us is the way to maintain trust. As a college student, we have to attend different classes . At the same time,we can meet different classmates. So,it's necessary for us to learn to deal with classmates.that involves building and maintaining trust . On my opinion,if you want to maintain trust between you and your friends. Firstly you should be loyal to your friend. You can not lie to him.On the contrary,you should have a heart-to-heart talk with him usually.What is the most important thing i think is that you can give him a hand regardlessly when him is in trouble. If you can do all the above for you friend,trust must exist between you.And people also want to make friend with you.