2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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As we all know,nowadays parents are always doing everything for their children.However,just for this reason,their children always depend on them no matter what they do.Graduelly,they can not finish work independently,which is not good for their growing. If i were their parents,i would let them go.I would make them learn to be dependent.Parents should teach them how to reach things they want by themself when they are young.In the process of their growth ,they may come across difficulties.In this way ,parants should tell them face hardships bravely.