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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5524
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
要求
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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文章词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视;有效的运用了一些复杂句;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

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"I don't know how to wash it!""My mother will tell me the way."Many children needn't do most things in their lift when they still live home ,because their parents have done all of them. Children have lost the ability of living by themselives, they maybe dead after leaving their parent.now we must do something due to help children to be independent. First, keep enough space to children when they do something by own; second, parents would courage them to choose their own style of life, to think how to improve their dependent adility; Last, parents must believe them, and praise them when they learn everything.

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