2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

The popularity of microblog In recent year,microblog is becoming more and more popular.Many people make use of the microblog to express themselves.It can express their minds,exchang their idearand transform the information.In my opinion,this popular of microblog is at least two aspect. On the one hand,it is convenient to use anywhere for most people.You can use the microblog when you are chatting.On the other hand,you can express yourself mind in time and share your happy or unhappy things with your friends. At present,the microblog can exit many questions.The communication face to face each other can be decreased.They spend too energy playing the microblog.