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last week, my classmate xiaoming got ill. he has a serious stomache, so he can not go to school for study. because xiaoming is my best friend. so i decided to go to the hospital with other classmates after class. we bought something for xiaoming. i know he like reading books, so i ready for bought a book send for him. when we got to the hospital, he was so happy. he said we are so friendly. in my opinion, friendship is more important than the money. and it is so luckly that we have a real friendship between the classmates. i also very happy that i can campany with xiaoming.
