一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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Today is a nice and busy day.First,I brush my teeth and wash my face.Then,I help mother with housework.I make my bed.Sweep the floor.I wash the dishes.And put some bread and milk on the dishes.That is so tired!After lunch,I do my homework.After that,I feel very happy.Because I can go to play Ping-Pang.Finally,I go home.I eat my dinner.And watch TV.What a busy day!