一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构不严谨；请注意分段。

Today is a nice and busy day.First,I brush my teeth and wash my face.Then,I help mother with housework.I make my bed.Sweep the floor.I wash the dishes.And put some bread on the dishes.Finally,I put a bottle of milk and some fruit on the table.That is so tired!After lunch,I do my homework.After that,I feel very happy.Because I can go to play Ping-Pang.Finally,I go home.I eat my dinner.And watch TV.What a busy day!