一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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Today is a nice and busy day.First,I brush my teeth and wash my face.Then,I help mother with housework.I make my bed.Sweep the floor.I wash the dishes.And bake some fresh bread.Finally,I drink a bottle of milk and eat some fruit.That is so tired!After lunch,I do my homework.After that,I feel very happy.Because I can swim in the swimming pool!Finally,I go home.I eat my dinner.And watch TV.What a busy day!