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Saving is a good habit for us Quite a few hold that as students,we should spend money little and little on everything as possible as we can .But others,in contrast,regard this may not make us smart consumers. In my view,Ibelieve the former for the following reasons. first and foremost ,as we know ,saving is the traditional viture of the chinese nation.So we need to pass on and carry forward the viture.Around us,we can easily see some advertisement about saving.And in our childhood,teachers had told us we should spend money reasonably and oppose extravagance and waste.In addition,saving is a good habit for us students.If we usually buy something reasonably and spend the least money to buy the better things .We may not waste other things.Last but not least inportant,we are all students now.Our parens give us money that they work hard to earn and provide every thing well for us .we should know it isn't easy for them to earn money.we should cherish every coin and spend each on meaningful things .So when we buy something,we should spend less money as possible as we can. To sum up,I believe students should spend peney on meaningful things.