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Today, more and more people in China are online. The public argue that this will bring a great impact on the society and life. To begin with, we can know everything without going out. On the Internet, there are lots of information which from the Internet every day. If the news doesn't satisfying you, you can also start the search engine to find out the news you want. On contrast, people should go out to communicate to get news which are not exactly right in the past. Besides, we ca keep in touch with friends on the Internet. As the published of the Internet some software about chatting, like Tecent, MSN, which serve people to talking. In these chatting room, we can get along well with friends, no matter old or new. It is a good tool to maintain the relationship. What's more, many employers require the ability of computer operation. The company who has several overseas partners uses the Internet to contact. It is not only convenient, but also economy. In a word, the birth of Internet gives a great impact on the social life, especially in our daily life.
