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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33623
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
评语:

文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

Saving is a good habit for us Quite a few hold that as students,we should spend money little and little on everything as possible as we can .But others,in contrast,regard this may not make us smart consumers. In my view,Ibelieve the former for the following reasons. first and foremost ,as we know ,saving is the traditional vitur of the chinese nation.So we need to pass on and carry forward the vitur.Around us,we can easily see some advertisement about saving.And in our childhood,teachers had told us we should spend money reasonably and oppose extravagance and waste.In addition,saving is a good habit for us students.If we usually buy something reasonably and spend the least money to buy the better things .We may not waste other things.Last but not least important,we are all students now.Our parents give us money that they work hard to earn and provide every thing well for us .we should know it isn't easy for them to earn money.we should cherish every coin and spend each on meaningful things .So when we buy something,we should spend less money as possible as we can. To sum up,I believe students should spend peney on meaningful things.

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