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2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:08浏览次数:6540
要求:
题目 看图作文:旅程之“余”(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160---200 words based on the following drawing
要求
1.Describe the drawing briefly
2.Explain its intended meaning

3.Give your comments

用户的作文(系统评分90.0分
评语:

作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用学术词汇;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

In judging from what is vividly depicted in the picture,we can observe distinctly that the two sightseers on the boat are throwing their rubbish into water which include a lot of fruit peel,plastic cases,leftover and so on while touring along a river. Needless to say,this drawing is meant to call attention to the phenomenon of the environmental pollution. We must point out that the current situation is going from bad to worse at most scenic spots.Therefore,it is high time that drastic measures were taken to reverse the worsening trend.First and foremost,the authorities concerned should set up stricter regulations against the pollution of tourist attractions and put them into effective practice.In other words,those earning their own benefit at the expense of the environment should be punished seriously.In addition,the tourist'sense of protection of the tourist attractions must be enhanced,which is of vital importance to the solution of this environmental problem.Finally,the waste thrown by tourists should be duly cleared away. To sum up,I firmly believe that the deteriorating trend could be held up through the methods suggested above.And a suitable environment will soon come back to its own.

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