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My opinion on certificate craze there a heated disccusion whether should we take many of tests for certificate.Does anyone hold the same attitude this issue? Definitely not,actually,opinions vary from person to person. Some maintain that certificate is extroadinary useful.Firstly,if a man have many certificates will be benifit for his job,especially when he need a job,the HR will be atrracted for his ceritificates,therefore his chance for hunting job will be incresed.Secondly,if you have time and energy,had better to take some tests for useful certificate. However,quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that certificate craze is unnormally.For one thing,take a lot of tests will take a big deal money.That's a burden for a ordinary family.For another,the most important key must be practice not all kinds of certificates for HR. To my way of thinking,i agree with latter opinion.In the first place,certificate craze is unwise. we students should increase our real ability.Additionally,if we can keep balance in practise and certificate,we can have a good future,i believe.
