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There are two points on the importance of a name, on the one hand,someone think the name is very important,because the name could be more convenient to be called ,and everybody have the own of name ,usually their parents give theirs kid a pretty name,when you grow up ,anyone else could call you in your name ,it' very necessary to have a name, But the contrast opinion isn't important to have a name,some else could think the name couldn't express yourself ,you should be defined yourself but not by the name ,some names could not easy to understand ,specially,when you dislike the name itself and express it means As far as i am concerned ,everybody should be gave a name,if we have no name ,anyone else could not called you,i still think call name is very convenient way in our daily life,and everybody had been gave a name since he or she was born
