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Most of people have a great enthusiastic on the certificate test,because the certificate level measure your skills and knowledge in your field ,however,in our school or our society you can join any test or competition ,if you have ability to do it, But some opinion in the other way around ,if a person can answer every question in the test,owing to he or she acquire more knowledge in this field ,but you can not say he or she own ability or experience in the field ,some think that certificate could improve himself for the future and have a more higher qualification to get a high salary in other position ,maybe,it's correct, Anyone could have a thought to improve yourself,and more people not satisfied his current position or salary ,to get a more higher level certificate could come true your dream As far as i am concerned ,it's necessary to get a qualification or certificate in your field ,as the compete become more intense ,to get a certification could be more useful way to change your career and you current situation.
