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Dear:John Driscoll This is Tom smith from the FOX Electronic Comply sales department. The important part we are talk about is the launch date of the new product and advertising campaign in the coming meeting.It is important for us to further understand each another. My company has confirmed the date on June 20th,and I wish us to establish a long business relationship. sincerely yours, Tom smith