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Advantages of being careful with money As we all known, money plays an important role in our daily life and we can't do various things without it. I agree with some people that think it is necessary to be careful with money. There are a lot of advantages of being careful with money and we should keep this habit. Firstly, in traditional china, it is a virtue to be careful with money and it is conveyed from generations to generations. Being careful with money is just like cherishing rice in the past time. It is also necessary in the modern society. Secondly, being careful with money is the basis of solving difficulties. If you are not careful with money in your daily life , you will have no money to solve some emergency. For example , if your mother get sick one day and you don't have money to send her to the hospital. What do you think at that moment? It is this money that can help you to solve all this promble. All in all, It is high time that we should be careful with money especially students.Only when we have a sense of being careful with money can we solve the problems by ourselves.
