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2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:46浏览次数:3103
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题目 My opinion on certificate craze
要求
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来……
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错。

用户练习作文:

Never once the recruiters would not overtake you until you have gained a plenty of certificates when you are meeting to some companies . This psychology cease to be a deny answer to the question that why so many people strive for their certificates of profession . It was no doubt that the following statement is a common situation around us ,indeed different one has different destination of their diploma exams .Some go for it for the hunting job ,the others maybe for their satisfying literally . Whatever the ending effects they have been prospected ,take my own perspective in the following discuss ,i would give my vote to the upper statement that supposed by me at least ,interesting is the lecturer ,as the saying goes .I thing in interest such as diploma should with some enthusiasm which is provoked from our real favor of it instead of anything else .

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