2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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As development of our daily life,more and more people need computers to use in their life.For instance,teachers use computers to make their class colorful,managers use computers to get more convenience and so on. Computers do make our life deferent,as a student,I feel very happy that I also have my own computer to use.