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Thanks to the composary education, most of the children can go to school for education since the age of studying. However, some people take schooling as an education. In my opinion, it is wrong, because education is a lifelong process which is endless. First of first, people can become interllectural through education. According to a research report, one's IQ reaches the highest point when he/she is educated. Hence, if we want to be smart, education is a necessary step. We can get the education from books, Internet, TV, even ourselves. Einstein is regarded as a poradigy, but he was natural born with high IQ. He was stupid in childhood and no teacher like him, but he never gave up. He tought himself calculus and even asked difficult questions which no teacher could answer. This is also an education which through out all his ife. Second, people can form a correct worldview and value through education. Education is an action that people learn the experience from ancestors. Everybody was born in pure. Education can help us to have a correct worldview and value which will not do harm to others. Deng Xiaoping who read a large number of books mentioned the idea of "One country, two system". He made China reunion. Hallen Keller who was blind resisted to accept education. She made a great success. Lincon who was educated well realized the hard life of black salvery. He made the Blacks getting freedom. Numours success stories tell us that education gives us a valuable, correct and highly worldview and value. Third, people can apply the knowledge which get from education to daily life. As an old saying goes:"The olds are the treasure in families." Since the olds get a lot of experience from books, life and other means of education, they know much knowledge than the youngs which can use in daily life. Without second thought, education gives us the knowledge which is not only on acadamic, but also in daily life. To sum up, education is not a short period of schooling. It plays an important role on the way of success which as long as your life.
