高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown—Sanshui Sanshui is located in Foshan,Guangdong.It is named for the convergence of three rivers—Beijiang River,Xijiang River and Suijiang River.Thanks to its abundance of water,it is famous for its agriculture and drink products.When you come to Sanshui,you cannot miss the huge Chinese watermelon and Jianlibao,China’s first carbonated beverage.If you love to enjoy the nature, Peasant-household tourism is also a good choice,where you can pick fresh vegetables and fruits personally.Moreover, because the water in the river is full of selenium,a kind of microelement that is good for longevity,the life expectancy is beyond the average. In addition to this,Sanshui is also well-known for the biggest lotus park in the world,Lotus World.It is one of the “Foshan New Eight Sights”—the most appreciative eight sights in Foshan.The park now contains over 500 rare varieties of lotus.Even in winter,visitors can also appreciate the blooming lotus in the greenhouse.After visiting the 1000-acres park tiredly, the tasty lotus banquet can full your energy.The main ingredients almost make use of lotus and the freshest local and seasonal produce,delighting guests with a healthy choice. Although my hometown is not the most beautiful city in the world, it is the most lovely place which raised me for 20 years and where the most important people of me live in.I love Sanshui.No matter where I am now,Sanshui is always my warmest home.