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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5945
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
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有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

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In recent decades, there are more and more people who surge into the cities to pursue a better life,but whether city life is better than life in rural areas,different people hold different views to this,and in fact,in some cities,but to people’s disappointment,the quality of city life is not as high as they expected. The reason for people to choose city life is that city is a centralization of various social resources,such as hospital ,education institutions ,large companies and so forth.these facilities in city life far beyond the countryside,apart from,people may pay more attention to the entertainment which enrich the people’s life,especially young people in city. From my point of view,the life in countryside is and will be better than the life in cities ,as to many people pack into the city,causing the high density of population which has also led to many problems in social aspects including traffic congestion,high living cost,and severe population and etc. however, in rural areas,we can easier enjoy the fresh air and even could eat the fruit and vegetables grown by yourselves,and because young people busy competing for the precious opportunities for a successful career and life ,at the same time ,inspite of the tight squeeze of small flats citizen has little time and no opportunities to develop close relationships with their family ,friends and neighborhoods,containing their personal life.in rural areas ,there are many activities which can provide chances for residents to get familiar with their neighborhoods.furthermore,some business industries and services have move out from the metropolises to smaller cities and countries,which will provide job opportunities for people living in the rural areas. To sum ,with the rural areas has more advantages than cities , the life will no doubt be than it in the cities,so, and for me ,l perfect to rural life than city life.

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