2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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with the rapid development of economic,it is commonly believed that computer increasingly play an import role in our daily life.we communicate,study,look for information and even work by computer.it makes our life more convenient and colorful.hence we depend on it extremely.gratually it also has negative effect on our life.for instance,when we are in trouble in study or work,we more or less do not think of the solution to the problem,but search for the internet.so we mankind will lose the function of handlement.although the computer is good for our study and work,we should use it correctly.we should treat it as a tool,we should not rely on it completely.because the coin has two sides.