题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
To believe others is of great significance . It is important for us to believe our family or our friends , it is good for us to keep good relationship . But as far as I am concerned , on maintaining trust is not easy as we think . For some people , it is hard to believe others . They are afraid of being cheated by those bad cats . For example , one of my friend , who was cheated by someone to pay him some money . After that , she does not believe those who want to borrow money from her . I think her experience is terrible . But it is unnecessary for us to be influenced deeply by this thing . So, how can we keep on maintaining trust ? Most importantly , we should keep in optimistic mind . Have a right attitude is the most important thing . However , communication is also necessary . It can help us to form good relationship with other .So, try to believe others and keep on maintaining trust !