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The Dragon Boat Festival As we know,there are some important festival in China.And The dragon boat festival is one of them,which belongs to all nation,On that day,we will have a holiday to celebrate it and commemorate qu yuan. In the past ,the dragon boat festival is not national festival,while it is now.Form this,we can see to it that our nation pay more and more attention to the dragon boat festival which is traditional day for us .As far as I am concerned,this decision that make people to remeber the grate man will give us something meaningful to us who hardy know about our country's history.While most people are agree with the idea .And all series of activities are held on that day. It is very usually and normal for us to eat zongzi which is on behalf of the food about the dragon boat festival.In some place,people will hold boats race that is very exciting. In my view,the traditional festival is one important part of our Chinese culture.So we should protect our culture and don't drop out our history.
