2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(29):Hard life is good for children

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Nowadays, quile a lot of parents are in dilemma. On one hand, the parents try to creat a more comfortable living and studying environment; on the other hand, they are also afraid of the children who becoming weak in the nice circumstance, and lacking of good quality to haven't the nice future. In these statement, I will knowledge the advantages and try to make suggestions to our parents, first of all, the hard life can make your children to learn saving the resources which can help them to finish the treasure accumulation second, the children that growing in the hard life have the innovative and courage personnal quality, these are the perfect quality needed in their future life. Third, the hard life can study children to reward their parents and other persons final of all, we must notice that the hard level should suitable but not surplus, we all know the children are not the adult and they need to be concerned.