2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查。

Nowadays,with the developement of the econmic and technolgy. the quality of life have become more and more beautiful.so ,they have more energy and ability to do something .such as shopping ,travle and make friends. However,many beautiful products lie in the shelves.people persure apperence rather than price of the products.then ,not only course many wast.but make mistake that Traditional moral values. different people hold the different views,but the same opinion is that vanity is very strong. As far as I am concered ,we should save the limited of source.