2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

As the saying goes:No pain ,no gains.In our daily life,everyday,we maybe face many different diffcuities.If we don not have a strong will,we would have chance to achieve success.Therefore, the persist is the key that help us overcome difficulties. As we known,only have a strong will,can feel the happiness of success.Student also have it.Because this is a fact that the diligence is the only way for us to success.It is the success will not always stand by us untill we hard work everyday. In a word ,in spite of the bitter we accept more than happiness. We need a strong will to face and overcome it.