2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

Computer and Man with the development of society ,computer plays an important role in our daily life.Every coin has two sides. There is no doubt that computer has positive and negative influence on us. on the one hand,computer has brought some convinces to our daily life .for example , we can learn what we want to learn through computer.besides, we can make more friends who come from different country. on the other hand ,computer has a bad effect on us. there are various reasons for it .firstly,many student are addicated to computer games,therefore they are bad at study.what is more,our handwriting become worse and worse since we begin to use computer.